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very nice

This was nice, smooth graphics, good jokes, decent script,
But the only thing that somewhat bothered me was the lack of decent fading with the music. I know there was some, but it just felt like every part had it's own song, which gives a feeling like a sketch show, although this is supposed to have some sort of story.
Try to make them fade better, or continue the songs during different scenes... if that made any sense.

Some voice acting could also be nice, it would make everything a little bit more interesting, although typing has also got its benefits (like smileys, spacing and stuff) which you do use to a good effect..

But great job and I do look forward to seeing the rest of this series.

excellent

dude, you're seriously fucked up, A.K.A, you are an excellent flash artist :).
nice animation, epic story and perfect sound, it's perfect

it's oke

Well, i cant say that it's bad, but I just think that's it really boring, try to add some background song and add some more animation, not just words that pop up, this would make it a lot more interesting. I understand that you can't really make a gym advert funny, but i guess that you could at least try to do so.
I didn't really mind the voice acting, which was actually ok. So just try to add some animation and try to avoid the gaps when you don't say anything and there is only some text moving.
Just keep training on your flash skills and i'm sure that you'll make some really nice stuff cause your drawings are still rude but good

not to bad

It ain't to bad for a third submission.
The graphics were ok, but not good either.
I don't notice any bugs, but you should maybe draw some sort of grid on the ground, I think it will look nicer.
I also noticed that my mouse reacted quite weird, but that can also just be my pc fucking up.
The last thing is that you should make a buy screen dissapear if you select a tile because otherwise you can just have your entire screen filled with buy screens (I know there is a close button, but making it happen automaticly would be cooler).
But still pretty solid programming, so just keep training and trying to add stuff when making newer projects.

epic

it's a really simple concept, but it get's really nice after a while. But except for the epic tune and just plain great game, most of all, I liked the story that was happening down below, it tells of land in total warfare, but you can only guess why. This really intrigues me and it gives a total extra dimension to the game, especially combined with the sound and the cloud that didn't give a fuck about what was going on below.
I guess you intended it this way, because otherwise you would have never added 'pay no attention to the world below', A.K.A, you are definately going to watch the world :)

epic game, keep em comming

overall okay

it was an okay game, but it really wasn't that interesting, a little menu with instructions would be nice and of course some music would make this game a lot better. And next time you make a game, you should try to make it more original, taking an idea that has already been executed isn't bad, but you must try to ad your own little twist to it, wich will in turn help you if you want to create some real nice games.